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Dear Daddy

Dear Daddy
We've laughed together
We've cried together
I've shared my secrets with you
We've joked around
You've told me the things I need to know
But there's more to us
Than just Father and Daughter
You're my hero
My best friend
Someone who's always been there for me
Even if you were a little bit late
I can always depend on looking up
And see you
Cheering me on
Through everything
School
Boys
Friends
And the loss of Mom
I know it was hard on you too
But you were always the sturdy shoulder
The shoulder I could always depend on
To catch my tears
In life's most painful moments
So please remember
That no matter what happens
No matter who I'm friends with
Or who I date
I'm still Daddy's Little Girl
And no one can change that
I love you Dad!
Happy Father's Day!

Author notes

This is for my Daddykins!!!
Written June 20th, 2004

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  • space blanket
    June 22, 2004
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    i'm terribly sorry about the loss of your mother. it's good that you and your dad have a good relationship...i'm sure your mom is smiling down upon that! great write! good father's day poem.
    ttyl
    -blanket

  • Dorkette2
    June 22, 2004
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    This is wonderful! i love it!!i'm sorry about the loss of your mother i can't imagine how hard that musta been but you still have you dad who sounds like a wonderful man, i'm so happy that you have such a good relationship with him you did a great job congrats.
    Brooke


  • queen Moderators member
    June 21, 2004
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    What a great tribute to your dad, He sounds like a great man. Queen


  • June 20, 2004
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    Wow

    This is a really lovely piece in dedication to your wonderful dad, I'm sorry your lost him but he will always remain & live in your heart, and Just like you I'm a Daddy Girl & I too, will always remain that way. My thoughts & prayers go with you & I hope that Father's Day wasn't too hard on you as I know it can be. Lovely background with this piece as well ---Sara


  • SEA angel gold member
    June 20, 2004
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    Excellent

    I love the border and text color and especially LOVE your poem. VERY well written. Sara and I were daddy's girls too. I'm so happy that you are still your "Daddy's Little Girl" for I too know how special that feels.

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