Propelling as fast as you can
Into the open blue sky
Loving the freedom you feel
Only received when you fly
Toward unending destinations.
Author notes
Silver in zdmckay's contest: allpoetry.com/Contest/668223
Written June 20th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- A Little Something Different by zdmckay.
300 points, ended June 22, 2004, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congrats and wonderful write i loved this one so much to it was short and simple.A+.
Hugs.
Mandi -
congratulations your win. This is a sweet little poem. Thanks for commenting on my poem, Touched, it is one of my favorite love poems. Cheryl
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Thanks so much for this. It's really great. He did like it. I rather thought he would when I read it to him.
zee
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"I can't stand to fly, i'm not the niave, i'm just out to find a better part in me"...lol good job, i like flying...i kind of wish i could crash a plane though, just to say that i did it...or maybe i'm crazy
good luck in the contest
take care
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How very fun
Your acrostics are always a treat. And 'you are fantastic at them' toquote lulu Good luck!!!
peace and love
Susan
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hey! i love reading your acrostics, you are fantastic at them! this is a great one! well done! great write! good luck! love lulu xxx
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I love to fly, my family and mates thought I was crazy when I went on a 7hr flight to Canada. LOL It was fun apart from this old woman next to me who complained all the way there, I couldn't even listen to my music cos she drowned it out.
A good write and good luck -
thats a cool little acrostic, nice write, keep it up
ps, good luck in the contest
Charlie
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