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A Very Special Father's Day Wish Going Out

Now that I am almost here there is so much to you I need to say
sadly I can not yet talk so mommy will speak for me this Father's Day...

I feel so blessed to know that you have loved me from my fetal start
mommy has told me the huge smile you had when for the first time you heard my beating heart
mommy also told me how you tried to hide your tears of joy when you got your first Ultrasound glimpse of little me
you may not know or believe it but I sensed your tears of joy as I floated in my fetal sea
mommy has also told me how you would rub me in her belly many a night to sleep
you may not know or believe it but I felt your love through my fetal waters deep
I know that you long to hold me for the first time in your loving fatherly arms
and I will not lie daddy, for I long to see your smile as I beguile you with my infant charms

I want you to know this Father's Day daddy that I too have loved you from my fetal start
if it was not for you and mommy's love, of your world, your life I would not be becoming a part
I know by all the things that mommy has told me daddy you will be the best dad any son could ever ask for
I only hope that when mommy says to you it's finally baby Dimitri time we don't cause you to pass out on the floor!  

HAPPY FATHER'S DAY DADDY FROM YOUR NOT TO FAR FROM THE FUTURE SON!

(c)2004
~Baby Dimitri and Nikki~

Author notes

YES, I am four days from my due date! I am expecting a little boy who will be named Dimitri and will be my husbands first child. Granted, my husband has been a REAL father to my six year old since she was only six months old BUT this time it is different as it will be his creation too and he is so excited, overjoyed and oh my the melting pot of emotions and in honor of what I think baby Dimitri would say to his daddy if he was able to talk, so I send this poem out to my husband Mariano with EXTREME LOVE FOREVER AND ALWAYS from his future son!!!!
Written June 20th, 2004

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  • June 20, 2004
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    Beautiful

    Oh wow!!! Please update us on your very special deliverly of your beloved son! This was very beautiful & heartfelt, I relly love this piece you have created & the ultrasound pic Perfect for this piece. I know you don't know me & I don't know you but I am very proud & happy for you --- I want to wish you the very best to you, your husband, daughter & little baby Dimitri that is almost here, I pray that everything turns out well as I'm sure it will. Congrats on your son ---Sara


  • Jessa
    June 20, 2004
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    omg nikki - that was just so gorgeous!! what a sweet thing to do for the soon to be daddy today this was excellent and a joy to read!! congrats to you and your whole family

  • xOx-Lil-420-Kid-xOx
    June 20, 2004
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    Awe.. that has had to be the sweetest thing that i have ever seen in mi life..Congratulations and good luck in the future


  • MargaretG
    June 20, 2004
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    Sweet!

    Wow, this brings tears to my eyes as I remember the attachment that my husband has had to our sons from the beginning. This is a special time for you, congratulations to you and your husband on the addition to your family.


  • June 20, 2004
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    there is nothing as rewarding

    only a mother could convey the love from within her. the idea is brilliant - i'm deeply touched by the message of dimitri - congratulations there is nothing as rewarding as the living creation inside you

    billy


  • SEA angel gold member
    June 20, 2004
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    Darling and Creative Poem

    C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S
    I am SO excited. This is my first fellow poet's special delivery. This is a darling poem. Godspeed and best wishes 24/7 henceforth and forevermore for Dimitri, you and yours. Amen


  • Chilko
    June 20, 2004
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    This is adorable, and very unique. Hope everything goes well with Dimitri, and good luck. Muchas amor, Mandy

  • moxie
    June 20, 2004
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    This is a beautiful write because it came straight from your and your baby's hearts. The ultrasound picture was a really interesting touch. Great.


  • June 20, 2004
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    Congratulations on your soon to be son. I'll be your husband is enjoying this Father's Day. Thanks for putting the ultrasound picture up too. That is so cool.
    Barres*

  • Desperado
    June 20, 2004
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    That made an amazing read, Good luck with everything I hope it all goes to plan. The poem was extremely unique and made an interesting read. Keep up the hard work.


  • WarmHeart
    June 20, 2004
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    this is sooo sweet! hope everything goes ok for your whole family! amazing write!
    hugs! kaz xx

  • AmyKareena
    June 20, 2004
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    Sweet

    Very cute & sweet. Not much in the way of a poem- but a great idea for fathers day- to show your man how much you care.
    I hope you have a great day


  • StalkingWaffles
    June 20, 2004
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    wow! loved this poem! great job!


  • Chrissy Lee
    June 20, 2004
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    Very sweet tribute. My husband and I have two beautiful daughters and he can't be happier.
    They are a spitting image of him.
    I lost my father in October....so this fathers day is really hard for me.
    I hope you and your husband are very happy and cherish the time you have together!!!
    This is a very touching and wonderful poem..
    Chrissy


  • Molassis
    June 20, 2004
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    This is very sweet and extremely unique. I think it's a good idea for a poem! I hope your husband liked it! LOL, lets hope he doesn't pass out... that was a nice humorous thought. I enjoyed reading this very much. Good luck in the contest. ~Melissa~

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