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Blown Away By You

Kiss thy lips
Look into these eyes
See my sorrow
Once again

Show me your love
Trust in my heart
Let me keep you
For eternity

Don’t deceit me
Or cheat me
Just let me be
Show your love

Lay here with me
Don’t leave me, ever
Rejoice for our love
Shown here

So kiss thy lips
And look into these eyes
See no sorrow
For your love
Has washed it away

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Written June 20th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • missinghome
    June 21, 2004
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    how do you get so talented? seriously. i think you're a witch and you suck talent from other poets and combine it all into one big super bethany talent. fuck and you wanted mind reading powers? greedy

  • Amberlee Carter
    June 20, 2004
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    beautiful...totally beautiful.
    Thank you for entering. I look forward to reviewing and considering this piece...Good luck.
    Always,
    Amberlee