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New Beginning

I can hear you kissing her in all those soft spaces,
Where I have once been
And will be again.
Sharing each others pleasure and
Leading each other on.
Sitting here I can hear her golden moans
Like dulcit tones
Shivering their way into the heart of me.
I quiver at the very thought of what is going on
The thought of you and her together
Makes my skin tingle and flesh scream
You are both so special,
So beautiful
I can not believe my ears.
The sounds from the other room are bringing me
To tears.
Your screams of joy,
Her earthy howl.
Scintillating reminders of
The two of you in my bed
In my head
Finally we have found someone special,
A love for both of us
Someone to share our life with
A lady who gives us a rush.
So as I sit here listening, wanting hopefully to join
I ponder all the happiness and lustfull, fun filled nights.
See you all in a bit
I think that I'll go join
The two loves of my life
In something we enjoy.

Author notes

Woot new life is starting now!! teeee heeeee
Written June 19th, 2004

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  • MirandaNicole
    June 20, 2004
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    This is interesting. Very original, and I liked it. It kept me reading until the end. Thanks for sharing. Keep it up.

    ~Miranda