You help us every way you can
Giving advice
Lending a hand
You show us how to do things right
Don't settle for less
Put up a fight
You teach us things we'll need through life
And you'll teach us more through time
I know you want the best for us
And you'll help us out
No matter what
But I know that you make mistakes
And you do get tired
Still even with your many faults
I wouldn't trade you in
Cuz no better Dad could there be
Then the one that God gave me
Author notes
Written June 19th, 2004
A contest entry
- Billy and J.L.s Father's Day Cafe by SEA angel.
300 points, ended June 21, 2004, 4 entries
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thanks Sara, i am very lucky sometimes i forget it though.lol.thanks for the comment
Brooke -
thank you glad you liked it i'm so glad for the new backrounds they do come in handy.thanks again
Brooke -
Good Job!
This is awesome, its nice to read a poem in dedication of a loving dad, there are a lot of kids, teens & people that have never been blessed to have a dad like yours. This is a great poem, make sure to give your dad an extra hug today, Wonderful Piece
---Sara
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awesome. loved it. perfection. lol. just a couple words that came to mind. ttyl, byes.
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Well Done
This is poetic perfection. I love the front of the car and the text colors you chose work perfectly. Your poem flowed well and you have a powerfully strong last two lines.
Edited on Jun 20, 10:03 because ''.
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