Breathtaking beauty encapsulates inner turmoil
Shimmering tranquility drowns a frothing boil
Ever-shifting portals of desirable glossy blue
Flashing emotions succumb to thoughts anew
Radiant goldenness surrounding a cherub’s mask
Deceitful upwards angles arching dares to ask
Peering into thoughts of fetish filled delight
Extravagant passions of something just right
Desirable orbs that delight in being viewed
Keep sight of the fingers as they are lewd
Flicking about in frolicking raptures pent
Rising to crest and then falling to absence
Peering back to the portals sensually soothed
Riddled with delight as the heavens have moved
Author notes
I placed this write in the adult catagory becuase it is a little risky to my taste, though I thought done in good taste.
Written June 19th, 2004
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....Oopps sorry for the cig as I know those are not healthy but oh so enjoyable after a great moment. I am really glad that you enjoyed this write as I struggled with putting it up here at AP becuase I thought it to be a little risky. Oh well it is up and here now and I do hope that others enjoy it as well. Thank you for the lovely comment, I really appreciate it. Take care.
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.........................Had to go have a cigg...That was so sensual.~HOT~ I love this poem.It swept me away! Thanks
Tammy33
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Thank you Hearts a Fire for the very lovely comment, I really appreciate you expressing your thoughts on this write. I try to be careful with what I write and post on here becuase I have a few younger people that I am trying to get involved with poetry and I dont want to write anything that would shock them. I really enjoy the sensual side of expressing ones love for another and am sure I could get really caught up in a write that would leave me short winded and wondering if was safe to put up.......lol. I may write a few more of these along and along but I will probably just post the ones that are safe. I really appreciate your thoughts on the piece and shall try to satuate your hunger. Thank you and take care.
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Thank you FifthDove for the lovely comment. I have always thought that your own mind is ones best imaginative theatre. If perhaps I just lead a bit in a direction and let you conjure the sights that make you tick it is all the better for the reader.
I shall endeavor to keep the cogs upstairs turning and the fingers churning and I appreciate the warm words of cheer. Take care. -
Very well written and masked with racoons eyes.
I love it, very nice indeed.
Keep up the imaginary thoughts, their very cleaver.
Bravo
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Whisk away with that net girl as I know you have such a devilish mind when it comes to writing these erotic writes. Thank you for sampling my smidgen of adultness, and yes I dont want to post anything that my daughters couldnt read. I do appreciate you stopping in to have a read over this though and also leaving such a nice comment. I shall try to keep your spirits up while I write.......lol. You take care and have a good time Desire.
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Oooooooooops I think an X rated just escaped again~
chases the escapee with a net
Very tasty piece I might add~
To risky eh~Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Maybe I should throw down some of my pieces
Keep on writing and making me give you these emoticons
More please
and much love~Desire
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Thank you Queen, I really appreciate you sentiments on this write. I also appreciate your judgement on the taste of this piece. I guess you can see where my mind has wondered as of late and I have to say that I have enjoyed the journey thus far. Thank you for stopping in and having a read. Take care.
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very cool
I love this, and i think it most tastefully done. Its an awesome poem, don't apologize for posting it. It was a pleasure to read, and i mean that sincerely. Please don't limit yourself to just daydreaming you have a rare talent. Let it loose. I wish you only the best. Queen
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Hehehehe......Well yes and no bohb. I do have it bad but I dont think it is what you were refering to, most call it a severe case of cranial rectideus......lol.
Yeah you got the eyes right, and I can still see them as the lashes flutter constantly wiping away the moisture with each stroke.
I dont know what is up with me writing all of these sappy ones, I guess I am going to have to head to the shop and get out the welding machine and cutting torch and have a go at building a new trailor or something. Perhaps I just need to head over to your page and catch up on the robotica, well that may trigger more of these writes........lol.
I appreciate you stopping in to have a read and I shall try to limit myself to only daydreaming about these type of writes. I wasnt too sure if I should post this one or not becuase I like for anyone to be able to read what I write without having to wonder if it is X-rated or not, but I thought I kept it in due check so I loaded it up and let her fly. Have a good one and take care. -
Hmmmmmm.....this is a slightly different style for you.
I find "desirable glossy blue" to be an interesting line...eyes?
This is a mix between sex and cyber-connection -- an on-line mind expanding experience -- physical pleasure not confined to the physical zones I think.
Wired in, wired up
virtual toys
For Cyberboys.
Man...you got it bad.
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