God I'm so angry!
So angry I could kill!
I'm holding the frustration inside me.
It's eating my insides. I'm dying.
I swear I'm gonna explode
If you keep pissing me off
My anger is a balloon
It's about to pop.
I dont know how long I can take it.
This madness is killing me, I've gotta shake it.
I cut my wrists to escape it.
But you've caused so mush hate, I cant erase it.
You've got to me for the last time.
I'm gonna end this for everyone.
So today I'm taking your life.
Not mine.
Author notes
this is a message to someone who is really complicating my life and screwing with my head big time.
Written June 18th, 2004
A contest entry
- Show Me What You've Got by LostParamour.
500 points, ended September 16, 2004, 61 entries
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oh wow...This poem was awesome, so violent lol...Good luck in the contest, I loved the poem, excellent job...Much~Love~Always~S1L3NTSCR34MS
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I liked the power you had. Write on!
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