Vibrant explosions of light
as the universe expands
in a mushroom cloud
and then,
life begins fresh
recreation before my eyes
as the world unfolds
in majestic fractal bloom
inside a bubble of silent intensity
I behold all that is to see
as all moments melt together
and I witness life from
conception,
to the end of eternity.
Author notes
Imagine being one with the universe, and witnessing all moments simultaneously.
I wrote this while experiencing the wonders of psilocybe cubensis.
Written June 17th, 2004
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your imagery is really good, and the words that you use are so poetic and beautiful... 'mushroom cloud'....those two words put so many images in my mind... drug use: shrooms and smoke from crack or marijuana or whatever.... dark clouds: it just described a shape of a sort of scary cloud maybe while raining.... Apocolypse: explosions of Bombs causing mushroom shaped smoke....see those two words got me thinking that much...this was a really good poem just like your other...ur a very artistic writer...great job
Much love and respect
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What a poetic way to describe genesis from gods point of veiw.. and even if you did'nt mean for it.. thats pretty much the easiest way to see it.. and its quite beautiful, but thats a standard for your work it seems.
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This reminds me of the time that I set outside, and stared up to the clouds mesmerize by the stars shooting in the horizion in the distant. Something like what you wrote came to my mind as my world went upside down to me to change how I view everything by it. Sorry, I ramble.
I really like this. You are a really talented individual. 
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amazing
wow great piece great work u don't see many poems like them often please check some of mine out i'd like to hear your opinion from such a skilled poet -
great job writing this
wow ark,this is deeply moving and special!! unlike any poem i have ever read!! in th eye of the beholder,what do we see?lol sometimes you drink the milk,sometimes the milk drinks you,lol i dunno what i'm sayin,lol but great write,i must be goofy from lack of sleep,but i really love your writing,it excites and enthrals me,way to be,poetic j -
hee hee awesomeness!
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Good
great imagery, good descriptions -
Amazing!!!!!!!!!
You did an excellent job with this peice......great imagery here...good luck with all your future writings....I look forward to reading your next one........~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Kittyom~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ;-) -
beautiful nice perception of this image, i liked it a lot, keep on writing....
~lauren~ -
great work I love the pictures you create
xxxrockyxxx -
Not only you think that. I think so too. This is a wonderful piece. I mean I like it. It is very neat to the eyes. Thank you for sharing such gorgeous piece. You have a wonderful night and God bless you too. Keep up the outstanding job.....................................................................
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i think the imagery and diction in this is wonderful. good job
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