The headmaster of house Slytherin
has a face that sets flowers to whitherin'
in Hogwarts, where he teaches,
with bat's wings and leeches,
the arts of brewing potions
to those who have the notions
of being wizards and witches,
and chasing little gold snitches
on the Quidditch Game field,
they first have to yield
to the teacher in black,
and they'd dare not be slack
about the homework he assigns
or detention they will find
is no easy fine,
if they step out of line,
so, beware the man in the black cape.
Don't mess around with Professor Snape.
Author notes
Hogwarts
Written June 16th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- all about SNAPE!!! by PersephoneInWinter.
300 points, ended April 21, 2006, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Love it
Very deep and dark
I thnk she wanted to praise him rather than warn though! lol
Spike a.k.a Suzy xx
P.S Please feel welcome to comment on a few of my works eg. vampyre,pain,evilness are some of the best
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haha, this is so cute! i love the rhyme and the flow, yes, those are definatly the two best qualities of this poem! i like the adjectives that you chose to describe proffesor snape. this is so cute and so funny! good luck in my contest!
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I love this poem! its so hilarious...i don't like snape, but you did a really good job describin' him. Great write!
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eyes light up I READ THIS BEFORE!!! as soon as I read the first two lines, I remembered it. I'd seen this poem in a different HP contest a while back, and for whatever reason it just stuck with me because it was so fuckin hilarious. I dont remember whether or not I'd left a comment before, but it doesn't matter because I'm leaving one now.
awesome job and thanks for entering my contest.
MORSMORDRE!
- The Dark Lady -
I think you did a fabulpus job here and the rhyme scheme worked quite well. Good luck in the contest. This was an enjoyable read.
♥ Kimberly -
I am ashamed to say, perhaps, but I always had a sick affection towards Professor Snape.
I'm even more ashamed of it now after having seen how book 6 turned out!
I like this poem, it was pleasnt and flowy and you did not portray Snape as a horrible person (which is more than he deserves perhaps!!) Nicely done!
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Great!
I love it! Wow, the rhyming flowed well through out the whole poem, and it seemed like you wrote the words without having to think about it at all! This was a great write, and keep up the awsome work! -
LMAO, this was good, the rhyming forced but it just wouldn't have been the same if it wasn't!!! Thanks for entering
***Strangeangel*** -
I love it. There really isn't any more to say!
~Dian! -
I erally like this one,, the rhyming was cool!! thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest
~BugZ
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Oh wow, this is crazily cool! An wonderful outward character sketch even the real Snape would be proud to show off. Especially, I love your rhyming. It's pathetic how most people try hard to end sentences or at least clauses at the end of each rhyme. This one was far too unique, and attention-grabbing to that.
All the best for the contest and have fun!
Cheers,
Mandy -
kudos!
hahahaha. this is so funny and so cool too. i love it. great rhyming. they didn't seem to be forced at all. good job and good luck! -
professor snape is a scary guy...so this is the perfect discription! love it!
Alyssa
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Wow! You jumped on this wagon quick. I only posted my contest two seconds ago. LOL I like this poem and I love the rhyme scheme. Good luck in the contest and now you'll have to wait two whole weeks for it to be judged .
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haha thank you that was truely amusing...I love the rhyming..very witty
*~PunkRckPrincess~* -
professor snape is tight, and cute poem
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This was pretty good. Your rhyming was done well, but I feel if you were to break it up into stanzas it would be easier to read. As I was reading it, I couldn’t help but think this would make a great limerick style poem. Right when I thought there would be some other ending of the line, you took my mind for a ride elsewhere.
I would have to admit that you captured Professor Snape’s bare essence well with this.
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cool . very good write. yoo painted an accurate picture of one of my favourite characters fr a book (& movie cuz allan rickman did an excellent job. enjoyed reading
-turps -
OMG this was wicked! you totally described snape really well! good luck in the contest, this was a really good write
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This is so perfect, your rhymes have a way of making me want to dance a jig. Good luck in the contest.
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i like the rime scheme
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hahhhaha that is scarry... you have the pro down to a te...vary good ...good luck in the cntest...stay cool ...
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Fantastic! I just saw The Prisoner of Azkaban, and this poem is just what I was in the mood for! Excellent rythem and rhyme, that flowed together perfectly. Your description of Professor Snape was flawless. Good luck in the contest.
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nice job it kinda had a limreck style to it... well done it was very creative... good luck in the contest....
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That's awesome! I love it! Lovely rhymes too. ^^ Good luck in the contest!
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