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Your Imagination

Paint me a picture,
Backwards and twisted...
With green for the sky,
And red for the ocean.

Paint me a picture
Of turbulent storms
Of jagged rockes thrashed,
By the wind and the rain.

Paint me a picture
Of hills and tall grasses
That ripple like water,
In the plains open breezes.

Paint me a picture
Turn it upside down
No where to hold,
Fall up into the clouds.

The key to the lock,
The path to the sun,
The rules of the world,
To bend to your liking.

This power,
This freedom,
This love,

Your imagination.

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Written June 15th, 2004

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  • Yes She Bleeds Too
    June 15, 2004
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    god i love this. it's like looking into some strange, beautiful world that's nothing like the one you've lived in. and actually being able to capture it in a painting. wonderful job dear. muchluv...RIKKA.