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I can

I can play pretend
I can put on a good show
I can hide it all
so nobody will know
I can smile
and laugh in front of my friends
I can pretend everythings fine
always will be and always ahs been
I can keep it in
I can hold back all the tears
I can be miss.happy
and pretend I dont have fears
I know its hard
but I can do it
I done it thing long
I can get thru it

I feel like a doll
being dressed to what people want
I can hide behind the dark clothes and make up
But i can pretend I'm happy
I can act like im fine
until I get alone
and cry myself to sleep at night

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Written June 14th, 2004

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  • shadow reaper
    December 12, 2005
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    10/10

    best poem ever.

  • poetic-dreams
    June 16, 2004
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    9/10

    I feel like this sometimes. Like I'm trying to be someone that everyone wants me to be, when I really need to be myself. And even though I need to be myself, sometimes I don't even know what my true self is like, so it's hard.
    Great poem! I really like it!!

  • crow69
    June 15, 2004
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    i'm not even going to say this describes me exactly because i'm sure you're sick of hearing it. great poem and hope to talk to you soon. later,
    *courtney*


  • Elsie
    June 14, 2004
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    Everyone feels that way sometimes. It's good that you know it won't last. Great write