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Heart Inside

It's not the time or the place.
It's not the smile or the pleasing face.
It's the heart that lies inside
Which draws me to her side.

In her, I can confide
What I am deep inside.
With her, my trust is sure.
With her, love is genuine and pure.

She always shows how much she cares
By the time with me she shares.
She lifts me up when I feel blue.
She is always honest and true.

With her, I can share my heart and mind.
No better friend could I find.
This is why time with her is dear.
This is why I want her so near.

It's not the time or the place.
It's not the smile or the pleasing face.
It's the heart that lies inside
Which draws me to her side.

Author notes

I wrote this using feelings and thoughts I have for a friend. It's more of a hope than an actulity because I'm a true single.
Written June 14th, 2004

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  • melphleg gold member
    August 3, 2004
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    sorry. no girlfriend, no spouse, no kids - I am a true single.

  • LadyWithASmile
    August 3, 2004
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    I really like this poem, I can tell you really like this young lady, and dont be too surprised if you decide you are NOT a true single for too much longer
    Great heart warming write
    Thank you for entering my contest
    Take care and good luck
    Ayesha


  • PurpleSky
    July 27, 2004
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    Well what ever this might be is yet another moving and heartfelt write. You have a tender heart and a carring spirit which will take you far