In Majesty
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Written June 14th, 2004
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Love it, I mena you are the best at these, but this is a very special one. Well done, even for you.
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Good Job!
Very Nice picture with words
Now I understand why my sister brags about your photokus so much, you do know they are her favorite 
and they are mine as well. Sorry, I haven't been as loyal commenting on your writes as I am writing my mine, sometimes I get so busy with that & I'm horrible at remembering stuff, Anyways Great Pic 
---Tara
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Awww... he's so cute and adorable
Oh sorry the pic distracted me. I thought the haiku was simply outstanding. I wish i could see the cub in person
How come you get to see all the cool things :| 
Love ya always.
Seraph -
He is a beaut
Nice haiku
Love it
Your pal Susan~~~
Clean bill of health from my Dr Mon my pneumonia is gone YEAH
Thanks for the prayers and get well wishes they were appreciated
I am so behind on everyone poems I won't ever catch up
Hugs
Susan~~~
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dang... you are a master...
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Wonderful! In "His Kingdom" (the Creator's), a cub is at home.
~ G
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The bear is just adorable. I liked this one.
~Amanda~
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oh how sweet!
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Wonder full
Hi Don:
A lovely Ku. My take:
majestic
in his Kingdom
a cub
The picture really enhances your Haiku as well. Wonderful job. Bill -
Love this and the photo how beautiful where do you take your pictures or mean how often? You sure capture the beauty of na ture so wonderfuly Don........Hope all is well bless you, Sherry
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Oustanding!
Mari
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a kings bounty
he feasts on
gummi bears!
heh, good one don. did you catch that guy on film yourself? -
What a breath of fresh air! Just what I needed on a Monday morning in smoggy, old L.A.
Thanks!
Mark -
Impressive
Came across your form of poetry through a friend. It is quite interesting to find that some words carefully picked and stringed to form a phrase can carry meanings like a piece of modern art. Shall come again to see more.. all the best. -
Picture is worth a thousand words, hm? Well done. I'm not partial to just a few words and a picture, but this was very well done.
~Liadan -
wonderfull as usual haikumonk. you express the picture so simply and yet tell it all... and the bluring in the background suguests the unknown... if you don't mind I am moved to respond to this with....
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Kingdom
Growing with him
He awaits
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thank you for shairing this with us.
Aregorn
(michael)
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Very nice...the picture is positively adorable. I love it. I'm wondering if you're going to leave this like it is...or add more to it? Hmm..if you do add to it, I'd love to read it.
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Good Write
thought a Haiku was a bit different in syllables? but I enjoyed the picture I adore nature -
I love it, monk. Great with the picture. Very nice, very nice.
Jenn -
*snaps*
awwl he's so cute. absolutely adorable. mommy mommy i want one. he's soooooo cute. very nice haiku a little short tho. i wish it were finished it almost seems incomplete. -
I like it. Wonderful portrayel in so few words.
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Very nicely done, as usual. I always find so little to critique in a well-done haiku. Of course, the photo is a perfect complement to the words. Good work.
Scott -
Cute picture. I like the picture too. Not enough words. I think you could add on so many words and make it even more beautiful. Anyway, thank you for sharing. You have a wonderful day and God bless you too....
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awwwwwwww, that was very beautiful! i love the picture, and the way it's set up, and the green background, it really sets it all up, great write!!!!
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