and now im drowning in your memories
suffering in your skin
hiding myself before you
waiting to fall again
i dont know how i got here
and i dont know where i've been
all i can feel is you dying
suffering in your skin
Author notes
this is just the chorus so far, the actual verses are being stubborn in coming. enjoy, give suggestions if you like 
Written June 13th, 2004
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oh my, That is quite a dark and sad Chorus you have here
I found this while wandering through the AP labyrinth, and you left me wondering, since I noticed it's written about a year ago... do you have the actual lines yet 
I wish you the best of luck with everything you do!
Leander -
oh wow. i actually thought that your poem was some part of a song, then when i read your authors comments, it was confirmed!!!!! i love being right *hehe* good job!!!! keep up the good work!!!!!
-pingpong -
I relaly like this so far.... keep going with it....
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holy mother of God them are some good lyrics! you're brimming with talent, my God. excellent, i'd applaud this a million times if i could. Wow...
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Hell that is totally something i would listen to, damn good job on that. Be sure to let me know when ur done with it i would love to come back and read it.
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dat was pretty good one buddy
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