I am a cow,
I don't know how,
It is magic
But it is tragic too,
I love you,
Do you love me too?
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Thanks you wizzy jo for telling me how to spell this what I am writing now and my poem and telling me how to set it out 
Written June 13th, 2004
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love is a ride on a cow
that is soon to eat one too many patches of weeds.
peace
justine -
airm it was coz me 6 year old cuz did write this but i stole her account and she was sausagesbeans so i changed mine for spanantonio!
aww bless her she was sooo annoyed with me but i dont mind 
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I am assuming from the comments you were trying to write like a 6 year old. LOL. I guess my cousin's four year old is a genius (well, he is nuts) because he's got a stunning vocabulary. But anyways, this was funny. But dood, that there background is a bear He might eat you. LOL
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what? Okay, you are a tragic cow and you love someone? Okay, ( I think some of the ryhmes are forced, no offence to you, its just that tragic and magic? sorry, I know you are only 6 but, oh well, you would not understand) Thanx for sharing this
pinkwhite xxx -
What dose doubt mean?
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I dont now...
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thank yu
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lol
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Thank yu for the nice comment
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I like it very short, but made me smile. You have a great talent for someone so young, I will look forward to reading more of your work.
Thank you for commenting on my poem 'The weekend' and also thank you to your mum
Take care Nite nite and God bless
Elaine
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I am a cow, too! Wow...this makes two of us.
Very silly poem .
- Sock -
Very Good
WOW! I dont even know what tragic realy means! That is a ggod way to ryme. -also: Some poems dont have to ryme, Lots of poems have fellings like: my heart ripped apart. Just an idea for you! Keep writing! You smart Writer !
~d0m1n1c~ -
I love it. It made me laugh! Keep up the good work. (Are you planning to be a writer when you grow up?) Good Luck!
~d0m1n1c~ -
i think the poem is really good, and I doubt too that you are 6 years old, but good luck anyway
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I like this poem, you have a good vocabulary (that's a big way of saying you know lots of words), for example tragic I like this poem and I like the way you've rhymed it
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Yes I do have fun wryting but why do yu not think i am 6 yirs old because i am....
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Okay, maybe I'm jaded but I doubt you're six years old. Well, whatever your age, have fun writing.
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OK Thank yu for the idea I can spell now because you helped me
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Well hiya, I like this poem Its very good for you only being 6 well done here you have done a lovely job but maybe you should set it out as more of a poem and not like well two lines I think that would make it much better
Rowena Jo -
dus no one lyk my poem becos no one is leeving eny comments on it
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