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They See Through Red

It's like standing in a crowded room
When Every single eye's on you
You can't think of anything to do
To afraid to barely move

Thoughts of blasphemy are shed
Not a word is ever said
Like they're the one's who've never bled
They're the one's to which apathy's fed

You can't be anything like them
Your thoughts are full of ignorant whims
Like standing on a tampered limb
The future has never seemed so dim

Every single eye remains
On you as if you are to blame
For every mishap uncovered by fame
But no one even knows your name.

Author notes

This is how I feel all the time. enjoy
Written June 12th, 2004

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  • grunge hippie love
    July 1, 2004
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    Hey Aleia i love you ... and I like this one .. hopefull ya had fun in Isreal!


  • Darianna
    June 16, 2004
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    Monorhyme...a little like paranoia in that it's singular in it's mission. Paranoia seeks to destroy ones sanity and faith in anyone or anything. Thankyou for entring my contest, good luck! Dari xx