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fake plastic love

i put a smile on my face
at the feel of your touch
close my eyes and lay my head down
right beside yours

i put a smile on my face
walk around town
act like i actually enjoy holding your hand

i have the best fake plastic love
so i think ill keep it
hold on to it tight
and always love you

me and my fake plastic love...

Author notes

something i hurried up and typed since i havent in forever.
ill post more soon. i promise. LOVE YOU GUYS!
Written June 12th, 2004

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  • -Pixie-
    June 14, 2004
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    welcome back chiki! For something quick, this was pretty good! I loved the idea of 'fake plastic love', its very metaphorical, awesome stuff! keep it up coolio-star-shine-muffin-tops!

  • perfctdeception
    June 12, 2004
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    Hey Linds. I love this. I know exactly how you feel. I've missed you girl. Keep coming back. Love, Diana*

  • allforthen
    June 12, 2004
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    its good i like this a lot tells a lot

  • RoughRider
    June 12, 2004
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    Execellent

    You don't have nothing fake about you!! I missed you my dear friend hurry back... Read my Author's Page and look at your name... I love you babe... My bestest friend ever.