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I wish you… (for Bluemoon)

I wish you…
Rivers
Sweet and cool
Butterfly kisses
Dancing in the moonlight

I wish you…
sunshine
and dazzling stars,
dreams to follow
and love to fill the night

I wish you…
Tomorrow
And many years
With friends
and smiles shining bright

I wish you…
             A happy birthday!



Patricia Gibson-Williams
June 11, 2004

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Written June 11th, 2004

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  • xShadowedxAngelx
    June 26, 2004
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    This is a beautiful birthday poem wondeful imagery ! i loved the flow
    Fantastic Write!
    Good Luck!


    Jacqui


  • Blue moon
    June 12, 2004
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    Hi,
    Wow thanks for sharing this fantastic write, you have done so well.

    Best of wishes to you and yours

    Blue moon

  • trekker02
    June 11, 2004
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    I could see this on one of those greeting cards with lots of pictures of nature scenes, you know, the ones that actually have good poetry in them and not just cheesy jokes? ::grins::

    Well written.


  • Jessa
    June 11, 2004
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    wow! that's a great happy birthday poem you did an excellent job on that, and good luck in the contest!!