crimson tears
filled with sorrow
now known only to the soil,
eternal resting place to what was
and never will be again
lost by mans greatest weakness
fear
and the hate
never to be forgiven
only forgotten
in the land of crimson tears
Author notes
Written June 11th, 2004
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I had to sit awhile and think what to say about this piece. The first three lines and the last two were my favorites. You did an incredible job writing this. I read your other poems and this was my favorite of all of them. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading other things that you have written. Thank you for your comments on my poem and for sharing your writing also.
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A powerful, sad and dark work. Keep it up and thanks for commenting on my poem
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This was very intresting, I like it. You are a great writter and I can't wait to read some more of your work.
Chea -
The ground swallows the liquid~
Feeding the soil.....salty nutrients~
Great piece you have here~
Keep on writing and look forward to more
and much love~Desire
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The crimson tears are an interesting image and the piece, itself, is pretty good. Nice job on this.
Scott -
nice very nice. i liked it. good write
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Deadly
That is really pretty. The crimson tears inhence the hatred and the things that will never be forgiven and never the words of i am sorry and its gonna be ok will come along. (think I made sense?) Anywho, i really think you captured a place were things are full of hatred and evil a place i understand well. I like this poem good job.
Hearts Broken in Two.
lidi -
Some day, crimson tears will be all there is. Nothing else will be, only the floods of tears, after the souls have departed, only crimson tears. nice write, sweet.
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