I dream of moments much like this
alone now
with some peace
Ease into myself some bliss
euphoric
sweet release
Some candles I begin to light
choose some music for
which mood
Strip myself to match the night
feeling hungered
more than food
My lover now is fantasy
one
sensuous and true
I feel only rhapsody
and soft tingles
through and through
I almost feel embarrassed
as my hands begin
to wander
Yet alone my love is terraced
and I need my passion
ponder
My hands are warm
my skin vital
smooth and aware
Desires swarm
and at myself
I tear
Along my sides
and tender
caressing my own breasts
While emptiness hides
a lender
in this my need invests
The heat now
it quivers
down and within
sweat now
the shivers
orgasmic grin
Climatic and humming
beyond
any peak
Thank you
for coming
I say
so to speak
...
Author notes
masterbation moment...
Written June 11th, 2004
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You have me all wound up. Sexy write! I dont know how else to put it, but very good descibing wordsLol
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Thank you, Levis. 
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i loved it
wow lady friend i loved this so much. you kept me there through out this very visual write , and the ending ,... perfect.... thouroughly enjoyed this pen . remined me of the way a friend pens in humor love ya D s xo..xo,, D aka Brother Bud
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ahh!!! dirty! j/k Great job, I can't write erotica or anything related to it...at least...not without a giggle. Hehe. Great job, much better than I could ever do! Keep it up!
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SWEET
This was an awsome way of describing such an embracement upon yourself. This was my first time reading a poem like this, and it was great. I definately approve.
The Closet Ninja Clown -
Well this was tasteful way of writting about masterbation! Excellent way of describing it! You have done an excellent job here! Tasteful and not vulger great job!
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WoW! Very exciting it. I like this write a whole bunch. The descriptions are very nice in this write and the flow of the poem is awesome as well. Thanks so much for sharing!
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I love the way you make her sound so confident but still unsure, the doubts that come through when she's 'feeling embarrased' but then carries on. It's hard to end this sort of poem yet youve done it amazingly and the pun on words breaks the tension which the rest of the poem creates.
Great Write! I applaud you! hehe.
Luv Kimmi
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great poem, very articulate. I like the line: I 'almost' feel embarrassed. good write.
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Ha ha...Cool poem! And hot!
I love:
"Thank you
for coming
I say
so to speak"
ha ha...very clever and sensual.
Great writing!
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The sexual pangs of a lady alone are vividly described by her own self and she lives in a world of fantasy, trying to gain some relief and release by masturbation- a common habit of both males and females that is not the true healthy answer to one's sexual urges all the time.yet, it is much safer and better than unsafe sex and its dangerous sequelae these days!It could leave a feeling of guilt and sin and sometimes shame and turn into a bad habit from which there is seldom escape!good candid write on a sexual topic!
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Exellent description, you're a good writer, keep it up!
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The heat now
it quivers
down and within
sweat now
the shivers
orgasmic grin- god i love this. and the way you look when doing so! -
sultry and truely real
Wow I am not sure I can hit the right keys to comment on this piece because I am still quivering with excitement and anticipation of what might come next, is it warm in here?, or is it just me reacting to this truely wonderful and completly honest and sincere writings of one very passionate and eciting person, wow we should all feel this way more often, fantastic and Thanks a million for sharing, this is riveting and alive and truely wet just like this mist off a waterfall, KeeperOfTheCats -
At times masturbation is better than intercourse when the urge of ridding ourselves of the juices of life becomes irresistable
It is all in our mind, when we most need the one who makes us feel comfortable enough to shake off every trace of restaint and shame, they are not there and in many cases they never share the space and time we are in. I enjoyed reading this enticing poem. Just woke up - wide awake now Thank you & take care,
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Great poem, allthough it ended before the begining of the more juicy stuff.
Peter
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