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how i feel

I feel like I'm tied
unable to move
held from life
kept away from the good
tied by my hands with no point to live
living in no where land
and I'm the only kid

I feel lost
lost in lifes little maze
and I feel so cold
everything seems like a daze

and in a crowded room
I feel so alone
I think I'm invisible
this cant be my home

I dont think you see me
I dont think you know I'm here
you looked at me then looked away in disgust
please dont take another beer

I'm sick of the screaming
sick of the fights
sick of the crying
it keeps me up at night

I wish I was normal
and lived a normal life
then the crying would stop
and I wouldnt need my knife.

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Written June 10th, 2004

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  • crow69
    June 15, 2004
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    wow, this is so sad. you know i'm always here to talk.
    this poem describes me and my ex. gr8 write tho. later,
    *courtney*