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hunting or girlfriend?

I had to choose
between hunting and my girl
I miss her.

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Written June 10th, 2004

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  • Yummy Cinnamon Bun
    June 16, 2004
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    that was awsome this made me laugh. it was great

  • kiddwolf
    June 15, 2004
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    hahhaha are you sure????? stay cool...


  • Silver Lining
    June 12, 2004
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    Interesting... very interesting..


  • Naughtygrlred
    June 11, 2004
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    too bad to hear that, hmm i am free!


  • Desiree Darkk
    June 11, 2004
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    hahahaha. Sounds familiar to me. Wonder if I'm missed also? This tickled me just right this afternoon.

    Desiree


  • Maatkara gold member
    June 11, 2004
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    LOL! I guess that was, maybe, not the best choice...? Excellent senryu! (I'd leave off the "and" in the last line, though.)
    ~ G

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