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For Un-Couth Killers...



with so much pain around in this world

bombings, shootings, graveyards being filled

I think it's about time we reversed the roles!

I mean, wouldn't you rather be FUCKED than KILLED?





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I hope this is the kinda fun you were looking for and that it at least raised a smile...
Written June 9th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • Twilights Child
    July 1, 2004
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    *snort* how should i know? i don't know whether to just shake my head and make some cutting comment about society today....or laugh out loud.... oh,well, humor is often a defense against the horrors that inhabit todays world. anyways, a nice write!!!!

    Liallynne


  • di ivers
    June 10, 2004
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    well you got a smile from me on this one...good luck in the contest..peace be with you always..
    ali i am sorry that i havent been around or written much in like forever going through writters block at the moment...maybe in a few days i will have something up to read...love ya lots miss ya bunches..

    ~~DI~~