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Am I going blind?

Overhead projectors
Make words
Look like little
Ants
Marching accross the screen
In lines

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Written March 9th, 2002

A contest entry

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  • Kellysharmonica
    August 15, 2004
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    Haha I SO know what you're talking about.. I normally get lumped at the back of the class coz I'm *cough* "trustworthy".. so I kinda know how it goes. Plus I'm short sighted anyway... but I loved this little thing just perfect.

    Katie xx

  • Robbo
    June 13, 2004
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    time for an opticians test ehh?


  • Elsie
    June 13, 2004
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    Hehe...thanks. It's b/c I sit at the back of the class...my teacher is such a bum and never makes the lettering big enough..haha

  • pozo
    June 13, 2004
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    I like the imagery of the ants across the screen in this poem.

  • banna
    June 11, 2004
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    intriguing

    Hmm, projectors arent all THAT bad, I used one for a project... I must admit they're kinda hard to read sometimes. Very nice poem. Deep.

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