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Confused spring geese

I saw some geese
      this morning
They were flying south-east
(And I thought I
     was confused)

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Written June 9th, 2004

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  • venus182
    June 13, 2004
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    Lol! Cute!
    ~Meagan

  • emmadilemma
    June 10, 2004
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    lol geese are funny...they're so loud, the way they all HONK at once...lol geese


  • Trisha Militia
    June 9, 2004
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    wow... ...this poem..so beautiful..i completely feel the sorrow that these geese must have felt when they were flying in the wrong direction...how sad and touching....i loved the lines:
    They were flying south-east

    ....wow....so powerful....LOL...nice write...it made me faintly giggle a little bit...so short and simple and made me smile..nice work dude