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First kiss

When you kissed me,
My whole body shook,
I didn't know what to do,
I didn't know where to look.
I gently closed my eyes,
And put my hands on your face,
And I felt my heart start to race.
We looked at each other,
And smiled in bliss,
Because you were my first real kiss.

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Written June 9th, 2004

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  • Violaceous Rainbow
    March 13, 2005
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    i liked this it has a lot of meaning and almost all of us can relate to it.


  • I dont know
    August 10, 2004
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    innocent and beautiful

  • scorpio
    June 9, 2004
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    sweet ... nice and simple ... as a first kiss

  • Candy N-G
    June 9, 2004
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    Simple and I loved it. Great Job keeping to what you exactly wanted to say.