I feel a sensation unlike ever before,
and as you turn slowly my jaw hits the floor,
never have I seen such a beautiful sight,
and when I see you, and it just feels so right,
that whenever we meet my heart starts to flutter,
and starts shaking so hard it feels like a rudder
and my soul takes off like a boat at full speed,
and then that's when I realize its you that I need.
*-chorus-*
*Your touch is like a fire, slowly burning my skin,
it itches and it tingles, and it feels full of sin,
like there is something wrong for simply wanting your hand
to meet mine in the air as we both reach for the strand
of hair in your eyes, which are like daggers, piercing my soul,
whenever ever mine meet them I spin out of control.*
For in all the world and of all the times,
there was never a love that even mimes
the feeling we share now,
never one that was so rare, and how?
Cause true love is so hard to find,
I am lucky that I’ve found mine.
*chorus*
And I remember the night that it finally happened,
that night out at camp where we snuck out of our cabins
and we went and laid down out in the field
by the lake, and it just felt so real, and it just felt so right,
that I thought it was you and not the moon giving off light,
like a being from Heaven come to take me home,
your presence gave me strength to fight the armies of Rome,
and anything else that might threaten our love,
be it a demon from below or angel from above.
*chorus*
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Written May 28th, 2004
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That was one of the most beautiful songs I have ever read. I try to write songs and mine usually come out pretty horrible, but this one is excellent. I am from a dink town in Oklahoma, by the way (sorry, I noticed all the others putting their locations; I decided to follow suit). Very good job on this one. Hopefully, one day, it can be set to music!
~Peace out -
Splendid!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow got me hooked what a write I just loved it Im from kentucky (winchester) but this write is really great keep it up i hope to read more soon!!!! ~Leigh -
luv it
hey this is really good i am from a tiny town in indiana...fun fun newayz i got your name off of the group we are in (a teens group only) if u dont mind comment on one of mine id appreciate it thanx so much!!
amy -
great..
Hey.. I finally wrote something else in mine.. great song! ttyl! ly!! later! -
Lovly
I enjoyed that piece!
good work!
(i am also from kentucky . : ) )
Edited on Jul 02, 9:16 because ''.
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