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The Terrorist

I dreampt of a terroist
His eyes were pitch black
He had an evil smile
and
crazy hair
He was standing in the corner next to the museum
it was art and science day
thousands of kids were there
but yet
he looked discontented because nobody was really paying attention to him
he waited till we all got inside
he locked the doors
and laughed as we looked confused
he yelled to us  u all will pay
He said say your prayers
5 minutes later a plane flew into the building
nobody escaped
except
for
me

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Written June 8th, 2004

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  • April Renee
    March 9, 2006
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    interesting. different. not sure i really follow it..but good job.

    blu