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Being a top

I love being a top
there is something about a helplessly bound woman
that makes me harder than a telephone pole
i love to spank (I am an ass man)
and hear the moans of pleasurable pain
while watching my lover struggle against the ropes
that keep her so securely bound
I love to tickle
and make my slave girl scream for mercy
while her pussy gets soaking wet from the torment
I love to tease
until my lover screams into her gag
for me to fuck her
I love to fuck
hard and fast
with passion and with angst
until we both fall exhausted from coming so hard

I love being a top...
almost as much as she loves submission.

Author notes

I'm a dominant sadomasochist, but most of all I am an ass man. I love a beautiful, heart shaped booty.
Written June 8th, 2004

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  • candy177
    June 28, 2004
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    I must say I love this - the only thing I didn't like was the gag bit - but that's just me, as I'm not into gags much. Thankfully, my Master isn't really into them either - He'd rather hear my screams echo throughout the room. Damn...this makes me want a cold shower! Loved the telephone pole bit although I must admit my favorite image always is the tent in the pants bit. But that line made me giggle a bit, before becoming even more entranced by your words. An excellent write!


  • June 27, 2004
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    What about head? Ass is ok but a bit flabby. A telephone pole. What if the said pole had woodworm. I jest. I might take your heads later.


  • DefinitiveFreak silver member
    June 22, 2004
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    Very VERY interesting. And graphic. Bravo for being so brave to write this! Marvellous!


  • Mrs Dazgy
    June 10, 2004
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    bottom spankingly rockin!!

    Well, well, well Sir...(raising an eyebrow in amusement)..I hope my Top loves being in control as much as yourself..tent pole mode springs to mind..hehehehehe...very good write..


  • carlspenc1
    June 10, 2004
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    it beats watching the telly !!! ... lol, interesting writing and the imagery is very good.
    thankz for sharing.

  • SouthernPoet
    June 9, 2004
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    great write and it brings out a point. I love the moaning and growning, thats another turn on. I like the way it flows also.
    Keep up the good writing.


  • Naughtygrlred
    June 8, 2004
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    oh really


  • SerenityNChains gold member
    June 8, 2004
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    very nicely done Sir...but what part of her body is most adored?Either way a great write

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