Red spotlight sunrise
Why cant we compromise
I said this to you
It stuck to you like glue
I resent that
It was a mishap
All I want to do
Is get back to reality
You changed my life
I wont forget
Why do you regret saying the truth?
I don’t care about that
I care about you
Please realize this
I felt like I wasn’t there for you
You needed me and I backed out
I want to make it up
Its time for a timeout
I need to check whats going on
I cant think now
Only of what you said to me
It wont happen again
I will be here always
Author notes
Written June 8th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Show Me What You've Got by LostParamour.
500 points, ended September 16, 2004, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Yay!
I really like this...I think that it's well-worded and just... uhm, yeah. It's really good! I can relate to it right now. -- I really do mean it! -
I love this, so much emotion, I can feel every word
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Thanks for entering my contest... Good luck!!! I'll make meaningful comments when I judge the poems... I'm just thanking everybody for entering right now...
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