fuck you!
i hate you!
i hate the way you're so naive
i hate the way you think this isn't wrong
i hate that you lie to me
i hate that you lie to yourself even more
i hate when you say
"i love you"
those words sounds so hollow
when the fall from your lips
you say you're sorry
but i know you'll just do it again
you hit
and scream
and slap
and yell
and then you try to hug me
DON'T,
don't fucking hug me
Author notes
Blob told me to so I must
Written June 8th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- who do you hate??? by blackestrose.
305 points, ended January 3, 2005, 13 entries
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What did you think
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wow....this was amazing!!!!!!!!! so great in the hatred...phew...id hate to be the person you "fucking" at! amazing! well done, keep it up x x x
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good luck, but i don't know it says this is an adult item and i'm only 15! so could ya maybe to somethin about that? sorry it's a great poem i just can't leave a comment unless i change my age on which i'm doin to tell ya this!
tomie- -
awesome write! this is a lot how i feel towards my mom. this poem is so full of anger and hate, just how i feel towards my mother. great expression of your feelings!-aimee
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powerful message///good luck in the contest...freda
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wow this is a great poem, you did a hella good job, anywayz keep up the breat work and best of luck to you in the contest
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::makes hissing noises:: You make me hate this man, too. Make me want him to rot in the darkest recesses of his own personal hell.
*ahem* better now! -
woah! this is one hate fuelled poem, wicked stuff! so powerful and just exellent!
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this was fucking GREAT........i don't mind the swearing....this really made me FEEL......reminds me of the feeling i get when i think about my mom......
-laura -
Very powerful poem, a lot of swearing, but maybe like you say it is real life, I know I swear a lot in bad arguments.
Take care and good luck in the contest
Elaine
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Amazing!!!!!!!!!
oooooooohhhhhhhh YES!!!!!!!!! yea, girl!!!!!!! that's what i'm talkin', about!!!!!!!!! I need to just copy and paste this onto a "Word" document, and send it to the Bitch that calls herself my (cough) "Mother".........ugh.........can't STAND her.........she's an evil slut that deserves to die of un-natural causes........lol........anyway, you wrote well here......you might want to check out my "hate" writings for my (cough) so-called "mother".........if yours was the same, you might appreciate them.........lots of love and hugs to ya', hun..........and good luck in the contest...... ~~~~~~~~~~~~Stephanie~~~~~~~~~~
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The swearing isn't every other word so that is fine. It is a very heartfelt piece, I hope everything turned out ok for you with the confrontation. I loved the ending, felt like that a few times myself................
stay strong
UsedandAbused -
Great emotion in your writing!
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Solid and right for the throat. Love the 'I've had enough' strength of this. Keep it up.
Stay strong.
Thanx for sharing.
Rodney -
Excellent
This is a kick ass write and yes very powerful and so much full of emotion. That it just hits you in the face.
Excellent write....
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oh hell yes! this is a deep intense poem that gets right to the heart of the matter. very very well done. keep up the kick ass writting hun
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