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My Number One Hero

My number one hero is God.
God is very important to me.
He should be very important to all of us.
No matter what or when.
If i ever have in problems in my life.
I go for him and pray all the time.
God been there for all of us.
So we should be there for him too.
Don't ever forget him, because he hasn't forgotten us at all.
Even if you think he has, we'll he hasn't.
God is good.
God is great.
Why don't you go for him?
God thought us many wonderful things.
That we should do in our life.
So why don't you make God you number one hero?
To make the world a better place.

Author notes

GOd is a great man. God is my homie.
Written June 8th, 2004

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  • Swingdancer01
    December 6, 2004
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    great

    This is really good to I think you have a talent child! not forizzle though ^


  • Lioness
    June 8, 2004
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    Aw, this is cute girlie. I get what you are saying.
    L.L.A.,
    Chea