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my little rant

i was there when you needed me
yea..i should have known wut my friend said was true
you turned around and treated me like shit
i don't care...
all i gots to say now
is fuck off!
you really messed me up
but you know what
i'm gonna be okay
i don't need you here
i don't need you period
i can deal with it all on my own
sometimes i wonder just how much you lie
i know you do it a lot
make people care...
then blow them off like they're nothing
like they don't even exist
tell them one thing and their friends another
see, this is why i can't be
i can see why things are the way they are
maybe it would have been better off
better off if i'd just left you alone
never said hey
oh...i don't care
well, i do, i can't say that
but i won't....
soon enough, i won't give a fuck what you do
but for now, i'm gonna sit here
and listen to you talk shit behind my back
yea...i love you too
it's all bullshit...
don't wanna hear it again...
later days

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sorry...just a rant
Written June 8th, 2004

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  • lovestinks
    June 9, 2004
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    aww- this is a really powerful poem. - i can see someone really pissed you off, and by the way i c it, hes an asshole, and i dont think he's really worth your time... so i hope you can get over him in time... thanx for sharing


  • morgana raven silver member
    June 8, 2004
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    wow this is great loved it
    laura


  • Demented Crow
    June 8, 2004
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    manny this is deep and i since someone really pissed you off you tell em girl so much bitterness and people backstabbing this world has gone to the doggs i love ya keep up the good work sweetie


  • Trilliana
    June 8, 2004
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    *wipes sweat from brow* jeeze manny... wow...