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Find My Way Home

I stand alone
    in the middle of
        a thousand people
looking for something, I do not know

I stand alone
    in the middle of
        a million passersby
looking for someone I do not know


(chorus)
I do not wish to be saved
I do not wish to be owned
I just want to find my way back home
no, I do not wish to be saved
I do not wish to be owned
I'm just trying to find my way back home

they say if I stop looking
    if I stop looking that I'll
              find what I cant see

they say if I stop reaching
    yeah, if I stop reaching that then
              they will start reaching for me


(chorus)


if I am on the run
    do you think I could run away
          away from time and space
if i unbreak my heart
    I wonder if I could
            put it back in its place

and if I learn to fly
      if I learn to soar
        will I find what I'm looking for

chorus.

if I learn how to love
if I learn how to live
if I learn how to breathe
if I learn how to give
if I learn how to save...
      I think I'll find my way

I will find my way back

home             

Author notes

wow a non dark poem, yay for me
Written June 8th, 2004

by: gaiascully (alese lea taylor)

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  • August 16, 2004
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    I of course love all your poetry...and its been like what six hours and i miss you... but it's cool i liked the poem as usual and hope you stay happy.
    LOve and kisses
    (Changed my name) Brody


  • Lil Meg
    June 8, 2004
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    good job

    those lyrics are really good. you should make another song and post it in my contest. I love the uplifting beat that I can make to this. It flows very nicely.
    Love Always
    megan

  • empire of dirt
    June 8, 2004
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    I love these lyrics. They really make you think! I think it is true, if you stop reaching, they will reach for you!


  • dope
    June 8, 2004
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    Cool, I like the way you set up the lines. I liked the first two verses better. The rest seemed very cheeeesy I must say and I feel like I've heard a lot of this poem somewhere else, in a song maybe... just bits and pieces... not accusing you of anything.


  • S A Adelmann
    June 8, 2004
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    A nice song. I would be interested to hear a melody for this. In the third stanza, should it be "put it back in its place"?

    Scott
    Edited on Jun 08, 1:57 because 'typo'.


  • punksense
    June 8, 2004
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    http://allpoetry.com/poem/664541

    you should enter!

  • punksense
    June 8, 2004
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    http://allpoetry.com/poem/664541

    you should enter!

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