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I hate you!

I hate you for the way you made me feel,
I hate you for all the things you've done to me,
I hate you for holding my heart,
I hate you for breaking it every chance you get.
I hate you for not caring,
I hate you for all your lies!
I hate you for all the times you made me wish I would die,
I hate you for making me feel like the worst person in the world.
I hate you! I hate you! I hate you!
I hate you for hateing me,
I hate you for making me hate you,
         and most of all
I hate you for you knowing....How I could never hate you at all!!!

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Written June 7th, 2004

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  • marianacolinchu
    June 24, 2004
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    some times love can be a paradox, as we love and hate at the same time, we hate because several we loved has fail us. deep down is because we loved them! cool poem , keep writing


  • Desiree Darkk
    June 14, 2004
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    I understand the ending, the whole thing and even though all the I hate you's had my head spinning here, I understand them and nod in agreement, especially the ending.

    Desiree