Morning everybody! How was your day?
You're not very cheerful, must I say.
I bet my day went much worse then your's,
They do say, when it rains it pours!
So I woke up on the right side of the bed
But instead of rose colored glasses, they were red!
That didn't seem to bother me that much
Except after I fell and had to grab a crutch.
After carefully getting into my new car
I just happened to slam into bar.
The manager was quite a nice guy
Even if it was everything did he make me buy.
To my workplace did I hurry
Can't make my jerk-of-a-boss worry!
At about 6:00 it's time to go
For me it seems, that seems to be a no.
Since I had decided to show up late,
I'll get to cancel my date.
Don't ya like how my lovely day went?
Shut the fuck up, and go get spent.
Author notes
Wow! That felt good! (Not true by the way!!!) =D
Written June 7th, 2004
A contest entry
- well-place f-word. 477 points for swearing? i know. too good to be true by TheOtherYou.
477 points, ended June 10, 2004, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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beautiful, way to go mommy!
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Nice way to let off steam... just one picky comment- your's should be yours... anyways I'm glad this really wasn't your day, because that would have been awful.
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Take Care
Graet angst poem you got here, Although its not true you made it very realistic which makes the poem that much more great
Good Job,a nd keep on writing, I wanted to also take the time to read & comment on one of your poems as well & I'm glad I did 
Take Care 
---Sara
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Funny
I fucking love it ... good call sweetie .. mommy's proud
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