So many times my days feel so crazed
I feel like I'm walking through a maze
And find myself in a spinning daze
That I cannot help but be amazed.
Then I say to myself, "hey man it's just haze,
don't worry, it's just a phase"
Maybe if I just gave myself a raise
it would be easier to handle these kinds of days
Or maybe go outside and catch a few rays
and sit down and write a musical phrase
Perhaps just go out and start to graze
at one of those all you can eat buffets
Like I used to do in my earlier days
then go home and take a nap on my chaise
And tell myself it will happen one of these days
I will get out there and set the world ablaze!
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Written May 5th, 2002
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Thank you SkyRider.
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excellent
Having one of those days myself. good poem. -
Thanks Birchwood, appreciate your stopping by and your comments.
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Now Burnt that is a compliment, as Dylan was one of my favorites. And I will read River's stuff, don't think I have yet.Thanks for stopping by and reading this.
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excellent
groovy neat
with a little bit o beat
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Nice write Blaze.....
was listening to old Dylan today.... something reminded me of Dylan here....
I mean that a compliment...
Rhyming and wit go together...
your creased the corners of my mouth for me
Thanks...
read Michael Dennis Rivers stuff if you haven't already!!!
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Thanks again joyismine, it was fun to write.
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Yep, I followed you right through the stages...good poem, appreciate your sharing your thoughts. -
Glad you enjoyed it Rodney. Thanks again for commenting.
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excellent
Very clever and neat.
Really enjoyed. Cool write.
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Thanks Pat, that was fun to write. I tend to write always in rhyme but this was a little different than what I normally do. I appreciate your stopping by and reading and commenting on this.
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Now that is some poem...!!
I was almost laughing from line to line with each new rhyme.
Super job...
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Ha ha Vicky, thanks. Glad you like it and I appreciate your comments.
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excellent
I LOVE YOUR RHYMING!!! You set that world ablaze...i will stand right next to you and pour on some lighter fluid....*wink*
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Thanks unknown, and yes I usually do write in rhyme, my brain just take me there. Thanks for stopping by and for your kind comments.
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excellent
Nice piece! a rhyming poet .. finally .. just kidding . i hope you set the world a blaze and once you do never stop. -
Thanks WD for the A's, made my day for sure. Just having fun here and look it got me an A. Couldn't ask for anything better.
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Hahaha...Great effort! No doubt about it...give yourself all A's!....*smile* m -
Hi Bonnie, thanks it was fun doing it that way.
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Thanks for stopping by and commenting soulful.
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nifty that you rhymed this all the way through and only one repeat! i liked it:) great job, Blaze:)
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enjoyed this blazeafire ... -
Ha Ha Angel Eyes, don't think I have quite set the world ablaze yet, but who knows maybe one day. Thanks for your comments I'm glad you enjoyed this.
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Thanks Kyle, it was just one of those things that came to my head and kept going. Glad you enjoyed it.
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You have set the world ablaze!!!!!With your wonderful talent that is, I truly enjoyed this amazing write!!! Great flow going on and great rhyme, I could read this anytime or any day, its only one click away!!!! keep up the good work!!! :) -
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nice. never tryed to write one before that everything rhymed thike this. you did a good job at this.
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