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One last love

The rage is no longer in me,
No more feeling to make me sin.

I need one person to be my lady,
The rest just to be my friends.

No more reason to fight now,
I just wanna hold you tight.

I chose you as be baby,
The one that I adore.

I need my friends forever,
But my heart it needs you more!

Author notes

This is about someone that I havent talked to in a minute but I hope we talk alot more soon
Written June 6th, 2004

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  • Bob Fox
    June 21

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    Love

    Love and the tender moments that follow can always be graced by a poets words. Nicely penned and I thank you for your service and sacrifice