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How I'm Feeling

There was a person
Who told me to say
How I was feeling
This fine day

So I thought and thought
With all my might
And I finally figured out
What to write

I am happy
On this day
For the skies are blue
With not a hint of gray

I am sad
For it is dark
The leaves are dying
In the park

I am mad
For all to see
Because I have
A bruise on my knee

I am excited
As I jump with glee
For there is a friend
That I will soon see

I am bored
With nothing to do
Everything’s old
Nothing is new

So when that person asked
How I felt that day
There was no one feeling
That I could possibly say

Author notes

I felt inspired to write this.
Written June 6th, 2004

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  • megz
    August 29, 2004
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    this is a great poemn it flows well

  • bl0nd3ath3art
    June 8, 2004
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    good job on this poem. It flows very well. And I dont think you ever just feel ONE emotion...its always... Love and caring, or hate and jealousy...etc. Have a great day.
    ~Kristie


  • Aeolus
    June 6, 2004
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    Wow! This was so cute and flowy... Yay...


  • Fern
    June 6, 2004
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    Claps That was awesome. Poor leaves.