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every day.

in tears my boy, smiling.
my boy, smiling, in tears.

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Written June 6th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • minisecret
    June 21, 2004
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    you're a bit too fabulous for your own good.

  • Simple-Minded
    June 20, 2004
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    Probably the worst yet, I expect you made this up for so as to enter the contest. Don't. Or, if you have to, put some thought into it first. Still, it does bring out the insincerity in people, don't you think?


  • tinydarkgoddess
    June 6, 2004
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    Sad yet makes you smile. I like it. It's great. Excellent job on this piece. Keep up the great work.

    Kamilah


  • Samplette gold member
    June 6, 2004
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    This is both sad and heartwarming...tears aren't always tears of sorrow are they?
    Thanks for entering.
    sam