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Christian Wedding Song

Note to readers:  If given permission, the chorus for my song would be the chorus, "In His Time", with a few variations here and there.

VERSE ONE:
Our God knew... it was you who'd be the one
He had a plan... long before "we" had begun
He could see...
   although His ways to me weren't clear
   that He was going to bring us here
In His time...

When we met... we had a friendship from the start
But love grew... and started filling up my heart
And in time...
   all by God's sovereignty and grace
   He now has brought us to this place
In His time...

(Chorus: "In His Time")

VERSE TWO:
Here we stand... as we take this sacred vow
Hand in hand... and our future's starting now
Prayerfully...
   as we are trusting in the Lord
   and as we're guided by His Word
In this time...

We are one... and to God's cord of love we'll cling
And as a team... we want to serve our Lord and King
In God's will...
   we plan to follow, follow on
   until our race together's done
In Him time...

(repeat chorus)

Author notes

I don't have legal permission to use the chorus as of yet.  I may change it.  But the message is definitely needed, and I've already had opportunities to sing it!  God is good!
Written June 5th, 2004

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  • heismysong
    September 18, 2006
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    Thank you so very much!

    I actually got to sing this at my friend's wedding- she married a national from China!

    I still don't actually have permission to use the chorus for my song (, which IS an actual chorus on its own!), but I'm not getting rid of the song just because of that!

    I do hope to sing it in my own wedding someday... but that's all up to God.


  • Mel-the-Believer
    September 17, 2006
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    Oh my gosh that is wonderful. If I knew the tune and maybe if you have a CD out by the time I find that special someone I'd use it. But in any case great work. Something different though, when you think of Christian lyrics you don't always think of wedding songs. Great work. Wonderfully written. Thanks for sharing. Thanks too for entering. God Bless!


  • Carpe Noctem
    August 13, 2006
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    amazing

    Very beautiful, and reminds me of how my relationship with Jody started. A very awesome song! THanks a lot for entering, and best of luck.


  • heismysong
    November 4, 2005
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    Thank you!

    Actually, I have the privilege of SINGING it in one of my best friend's weddings on the 19th! My music pastor helped me get the melody down on paper, as well as figure out some of the chording to it- I'm so excited!


  • penman gold member
    November 4, 2005
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    Excellent

    This is so wonderful. It has such a magical and soothing flow to my eyes at least. I can imagine any Christian couple considering marriage would enjoy using this song.


  • My unshed tears
    March 27, 2005
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    beautiful wedding song, i wish i had someone in my life that i loved with that kind of passion. awesome job!

    thanks for entering my contest and good luck, sorry it is taking me so long to get through all the entries but there are a lot of them and I have been away all weekend. I will do my best to get this wrapped up in the next couple of days!

  • heismysong
    March 21, 2005
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    Thank you! My only question is this: How did you come across my song?

  • kntryg
    March 21, 2005
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    "Awesome"

    heismysong,
    Very Very Beautiful song/poem... I couldn't tell you which verse I like the most. But I would love to hear the music for it that you would choose...Awesome Writing...kntryg


  • Miss Belligerence
    November 13, 2004
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    wow, great job. this would be a good wedding song. I hope you can get it played your wedding one day! Thankd for entering and good luck


  • DarlingDeath
    June 6, 2004
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    Beautiful

    If I wrote a song like that, I wouldn't get married unless that was played, either!!! I love the part "When we met... we had a friendship from the start But love grew... and started filling up my heart" ... this song was so beautifully written!!!! Bravo!


  • June 6, 2004
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    Beautiful! That's a great wedding song.

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