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Suffer

Each second you're gone
With him
Causes another piece of my heart
To shatter
My world is dim now
Dulled thoughts
Dulled memories
Of you lying next to me
Wrapped in my arms
Tears roll down my cheeks
My arms, the hidden scars
Vanished for years
How I long to reopen them
With my dull, rusted razor
Feel the pain,
Flowing slowly out of me
Alas, I cannot
Too many promises broken
You knew what you were doing
How it would make me feel
But you expect me to
Just deal with it
How can I trust you, love?
5 months of bitter pain
All because of him
"One night and he's gone"
You believe a liar?
Death please take me!
Save me from this hell.
I do not deserve this torment
I have endured for far too long
And gotten nothing to show for it
Somebody kill me...
Please?
End my suffering

Author notes

the collection of my emotions right now... my heart is torn, tattered, and broken... rent from my chest by the twisted talons of love... kill me.
Written June 5th, 2004

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  • metalheadmaniac
    June 5, 2004
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    hey really great poem here. I can tell there was alot of emotion and grief put into this poem and sometimes that makes some of the greatest poems is the human heart. Nicely done with great style, flow, and use of words to make a great poem. Nice job and keep it up!

  • vampirepixie
    June 5, 2004
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    cameron...dont hate me cause i care for other ppl...sometimes more than i should!