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Most of the time

Most of the time,
I feel all alone
with no one by my side
oh I wish they were.

Most of the time,
I feel like a blond
Which thats not a problem at all.

Most of the time,
I feel so depressed
As I feel right now
And as you can tell.

Most of the time,
I feel like killing myself.
I just don't want anyone to know

Most of the time,
I hate my life
I just feel like changing it, but don't know how.

Most of the time,
I feel like a have to be different
not like others are.

Most of the time,
I always think of my awesome friends and family.

Most of the time,
I want to live rich
so I can have what I want.

Most of the time,
I don't feel like going to school.
I need to so I can get a great job when I get older though.

Most of the time,
I think I talk to much
Everyone tells me that I do.

Most of the time,
I want to be bad.
But I know thats not me at all,
because I know better than that.

Most of the time,
I know god is with me
no matter what I do.
He helps me out in my hard problems that I may have.



Author notes

Most of the time I just think alot about this stuff.

Written June 3rd, 2004

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  • Swingdancer01
    December 6, 2004
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    good

    I really am affended(blonde)!!!!!Jk

  • BigBadMuffin
    June 5, 2004
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    shaheeesh great write, i love it , i can relate to every line in that piece. nice job


  • Lioness
    June 3, 2004
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    Hey Girlie,
    I know how you feel, I think about some of these things also. Alot of people do. I liked your poem, like always you wrote another good one.
    Lovies Lots Always,
    Chea