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Nice Milk Makers

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Oh nice milk

Nice milk makers

Ewe nice milk

Nice milk makers

The feast was spread out well
I drank too much and fell
My headache hurt like hell
But the meat was quite tender
I surrender
Air brushed your face upon my fender
I prefer mine rare
As I stare without a care

Her eyes made me surrender
Try the reefer and wine
Smoke that kind
It silences my many moods
The hostess would like to sin with me
To strike up a bargain you see
For the love of Mary just let me be
You're enhancing the evils brewing inside of me
As a favorite after supper tea

Sandalwood partner
Jasmine lover
Opium keeper
Consort to the Grim reaper
Who is forcing me to keep her
Her blow jobs rule
Breath is too cool
She is the orgasmic fool
Sit across from me and tool
Together forever this tether is lust
But for now, I cherish, this smiling bust.

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gangbox.com/mp3/nicemilkmakers.mp3


64.34.180.106/songs.aspx?SongID=2924&ArtistID=9993
Written June 2nd, 2004

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  • bobrocks
    June 10, 2005
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    I enjoyed the imagery here. I like the way that you make this woman seem so evil and so desireable at the same time.


  • LadyUnique silver member
    December 18, 2004
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    all kinds of visions popped in and out of my head when i read this.
    a man and a woman in an extremely low cut dress, out to dinner with a flirting hostess hovering nearby sending hot eye shots across the room... a woman who lies... each time i read it there is more. and that's just the superficial images... deeper ones change even faster.
    geez you're good!


  • ----michael----
    December 18, 2004
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    fair play to bloodand flesh for being honest in his/her opinion, but, I may be wrong but I didnt think it was meant to be humoros, was it? even with the words milk makers in it. and dude, you are sick, I mean, a blow job from a cow is just ridick. I have had a few pigs do it, but a cow? pull the udder one bud!

  • bloodand flesh
    December 18, 2004
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    I guess I am in the minority, because I didn't think this poem was good at all. I see the attempt at humor but thats about it. I guess keep up the good work though because everyone but me seemed to love it. (I think it was corny, rhyming was way to forced, and just unfunny).


  • June 12, 2004
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    hey, i really dig that fat jazzy base line, and the lose accompaniment you croon over...quite cool...excellent quality on the production as well...sounds great. Definitely not smash hit pop material...but all the better for it..loved the cool casual, achy style of the vocals too. real good.


  • horus8 gold member
    June 12, 2004
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    My nudity is no joking matter.

    gangbox.com/mp3/nicemilkmakers.mp3


  • horus8 gold member
    June 12, 2004
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    you like improv jazz.

    gangbox.com/mp3/nicemilkmakers.mp3


  • horus8 gold member
    June 12, 2004
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  • horus8 gold member
    June 12, 2004
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    http://gangbox.com/mp3/nicemilkmakers.mp3


  • Catressa gold member
    June 12, 2004
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    ahh sandalwood that has lead to the rise and fall of many a man , knows because she wears it , it was good , but why is the woman to blame ? she forced you right ? held a gun to your head ha ha , her and reefer and wine and milk makers , god i gotta love something called milk makers , dying laughing here , be safe catressa


  • MissHapps
    June 3, 2004
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    Got a light?


  • June 2, 2004
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    and all this time I thought you didnt even notice....i just kept buying lower cut dresses, and sqeeezin em in and up...i am flattered, really.


  • horus8 gold member
    June 2, 2004
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    So did I


  • Naughtygrlred
    June 2, 2004
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    I found this song to be really jazzy and upbeat!

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