Look what you’ve done to me,
So scared to step outside the realms of reality,
Don’t you see that I’m different?
I know I’m nowhere near perfect,
But I don’t want to be like them,
Won’t you love me just a little longer?
Leaving me when I need you the most,
Taking the best of me and turning it to the worst,
The blood drips down this face but nobody cries,
Won’t you shed one tear?
Am I not worth the pain or the sacrifice?
Was I nothing more than a slave to you?
Pray, one day you’ll realize,
My love for you burned so true,
Your love never seemed to have ignited,
Maybe one day it will change,
Forever this name will remain,
It’s engraved, Only God will see,
It’s Your Name…
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Just Felt Like Writing, havn't in awhile, so i started to write and this is what came out. Most people don't belive in free-writing, but that's basically all i do. My poetry is just the feelings at the time. Goodnite.
Written June 2nd, 2004
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awesome!
This is POWERFUL... i'm so speechless, that's all I can say.... It's amazing. I'm stunned...
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Amy -
That was amazing. I believe in free writing though I basically write things that I am going through. This was beautifully written. It hit me straight in my heart and grabbed me around my throat. Reminds me of exactly the relationship I was in and recently ended.
Bravo!!
xSarahx
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