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Dont turn back

Confusion in your eyes,
for your tears,
I wonder why.
Smiles return,
but the pain never leaves.
And you think no-one can see.

Suspicion of the thought,
Remorse is all you've got.
Your hallow face
sinks in deep.
From all the pain,
you seem to keep.

I want to take you away,
and hold you close,
It'll be okay.

The yesteryear's we've all been past.
Don't give in now,
Don't turn back.

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Written June 1st, 2004

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