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Tarnished

If this life is all it seems;
nectar sweet, gold that gleams,
why does all good fade away?
Gold dulls as time goes by,
nectar basins swiftly dry,
leaving cracked, empty holes.

People age, shrivel with years,
lovers re’lize their fears.
The end, for them, comes too soon.
Moon’s waxing and waning
marks lives by Nature’s reining;
Wondrous spells yet unlived.

Time elapsing, too much haste.
Hearty cliff, wind defaced;
Solid stone erodes away.
Relics crumbling behind
Boggling all that is mankind,
causing mass confusion.

The current world soon is doomed,
Peace and care deep entombed
within soulless human shells.
War ‘neath the branched olive,
angry missiles flare above
to raze all good on Earth.

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Written May 23rd, 2004

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  • My Seven Miseries
    November 16, 2004
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    great work.. finally, someone else who does the on off rhyming thing that i do... yay!! this poem was very vivid... excellent.
    Loves
    KatD


  • The Zach Project
    November 3, 2004
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    Imagery FINALY


  • The Zach Project
    November 3, 2004
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    Crap i can't spell. Iamgery


  • The Zach Project
    November 3, 2004
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    EXCELLENT POEM

    Excellent poems Chris. I liek the imagry.

  • GoGo
    September 21, 2004
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    hey, this is great. sad as it may be, this is true! the world is in a slump at the moment. good write!

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