Waking up to you each morning,
to see you on my mantle
and calling my name without warning.
This bright cup that holds my key
and making me happy to the highest degree.
So, please let me win this contest
so I can show my talent at best.
The color in all its glory
so I can tell my friends this is not a sob story.
Gold is my favorite color
so I can scream and stand taller.
Silver is my second best
to come in at your request.
Bronze is true to the word
but don't let me fall into third.
The stars are shining bright
if I win this contest my spirits will ignite.
Author notes
Written May 31st, 2004
A contest entry
- Let your words shine by meena krish.
300 points, ended March 30, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your oldest prewrite poems and my 20th contest by stargazer..
650 points, ended April 20, 417 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you and I'm glad you smiled. Kendhal22
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this is such a cute and sweet write..and also truthful. You suerly put a smile on my face..and I thank you for that. Thank you for your entry..and good luck to you.
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When I first came aboard to allpoetry. I was writing and never seemed to have the fun it. This one cheers me up from time to time after I recieved my trophys. Kendhal22
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Lol this was kind of cute.. and a bit comical. I always get a good laugh out of the author's comments when someone forgets to take the requirements from a different contest out before they re-enter it into another contest.
Cute write and good luck.
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Thank you for commenting and glad you liked my poem. Kendhal22
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This poem brought my spirits up... Most of these poems are sad, so it was nice reading your more happier poem...... Well great write.... You used great rhyme. Well keep writing, and good luck in my contest. Laters.
~Lost~
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I'm glad you liked my poem. Kendhal22
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Lmao...I love this!! Totally makes me laugh. Awesome job!!!
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I liked it when I didn't have any trophy. Just trying to win lol. Kendhal22
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Ha ha ha, this poem is awesome. i luv it. it cracks me up!! But this poem is very good. You an aswesome poet. This poem rocks my rocks, very well writin! you better keep on writing or i will be mad, cuz ur soo good! Keep up the great work! Thanks for entering, and the best of luck to u!! and you should check out some of my poems!
Always~
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Thank you.Kenhal22
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hahaha
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lol my butt off. Please!!!!! give me some points. Kendhal22
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haha, nuh uh!
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Your too cool for that lol. Kendhal22
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Haha, no problem. You keep on applauding my comments!! They aren't very special comments lol... Anyways keep writing and maybe we could hold a contest sometime.
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You're too kind lol. Thank you for the comment. Kendhal22
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Lol! Well, it certainly did. Maybe you'll get points for livliness (sp?)!
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I thought I would liven things up. Thank you for the comment. Kendhal22
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I liked your scheme of the poem, but the intention was for the poem to be about second chances. I hope you understand.
Jen -
Thank you for enjoying my poem,but please let me win.Kendhal22
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Wow this is very good. Very discripted. I really enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest. Heather
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This poem was great! I think everyone who is in the contest can relate. This was a very good and creative subject to write about. Once again, great write! Thanks for entering my contest and good luck!
~DJ~
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