by Gregg Rowe
Time to leave small town Catholic hypocrisy
A narrow, straight world with history of abuse and shame
I know it will be a razor sharp bladed pain
Because I have felt it before
It needs to slice my soul
So I can welcome
Positive, electric pain
After an adulthood of numbness
Childhood memories culminate cry-filled dreams
I am a toaster with two slits
Have exercised my throat
To prevent a proverbial reflex gag
Exotically happy
Hearing the masculine moan
Of pleasure: found a way to give
I know it will be a razor sharp bladed pain
Diluted by loving kisses on male moistened lips
Sashaying touches across erect nipples
Electric nerves culminate a desire
To receive the razor bladed pain
Musky odours slip up my nostrils
Intense firm manliness slide in
Fingers caress rectum
Probe the shaved rose bud
There needs (has) to be a first
Penetration
Not of probing masculine fingers
Warming my already heated pole
I need (have) to be a first
Razor sharp bladed pain
A slice in my soul cut out forever
Feel the positive powerful cock of pleasure
Replace it forever with the newfound discovery
My anus is a pleasurable route of my sexuality
There needs (has) to be a first
Author notes
2. Speaking of erotica, describe me your fantasy! I want to feel it!
Written May 28th, 2004
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So graphic. Good job. Good luck and thanks for entering hun.
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The first I guarantee
I agree this is the first of the highest degree. I loved that graphic but this is the first that really takes the cake. But hey that is one of my quirks. -
wowzers!
I agree with 'renezvous'. This was amazing! I am truly happy, cuz not often enough I read good poetry. So...you have made my night.
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*jaw to the floor* Wow. Very, very powerful write. Not a subject many like to wrangle but you handled it so well. It took me a couple of read through to fully comprehend it, too, but once I did, I was impressed.
Kudos to you.
Thanks for the awesome entry.
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I applaud!
I can very much relate to this poem, though your words and metaphors make it seem like I'm lost or ignorant to it. Good read; this is certainly one to think about. -
nice metaphors....good job and good luck
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First of all, i love the pic you chose for this one. After seeing the pic, i knew this would be good. but it was much better then i thought.
Great work
Tammy
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ouch.
is it in yet?
Lord of the Cock Ring, that was a nice poem.
Ya gonna be busy later tonight? -
You always do such a great job writing....but your erotic writes are my favorite. Somehow you capture things so perfectly for me. I am not sure what the confusion was for everyone, but I know when I am tired when I am reading poetry, anything is confusing. Love the photo and background as well. Always enjoyed OhMyGoodness.com....but never thought to "borrow" from there .....great idea. Cheryl
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I was truly amazed at the raw power and intensity of this poem of yours. So many elegantly created metaphorical images that kept this reader spellbound from first line to last. As I read this marvelous piece, i found myself caught up into the illusion world that was created. It was as if the lines have life of their own . I see this as a poem of searching and seeking for redemption and validation. Mixed emotions, here, dude as, tho i would not have picked the topic to express this, i could not have written a better poem to express those thoughts. Blessings and best wishes, richard
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took three reads for me to "get it"
lord have mercy, i am dense!
then it took another scan to connect the poem and the graphic
it is either time for bed...or for a full brain tune-up!
not sure whether to howl with laughter, or get horny
guess it will be the former, as the latter seems to have taken a long leave of absence.
good luck with the contest my friend
(and with all the other stuff too...no pun intended)
hugs and mwa's
~liz -
Sensual
i think you're a very talented erotic poet. would you adopt me? ~penumbrapoet -
You did a great job on this. That pic cracks me up and I love your background. Thank you so much for entering the contest.
~whisper
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Explicit and powerful.
Dear Gregg,
My late Mum always told me "If at first you don't understand it, try, try again." Well, I think on the third read I maybe getting the gist but as I'm still not quite sure I'll read it again. (Bloody thick kiwi!)
Certainly there's explicit imagery, deft metaphor and masterly writing and it's evident that you are making up for lost time (this is the third LOR posting I've commented on today!)
Like Angelica, I'm wrapt over the pic which I understood straight off. How'm I doing, buddy? Let's applaud!!
Love and regards, Hugh.
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Oh Gregg, love the pic,can't stop laughing at it, great poem also my friend~Lovesya~Joan
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haha that was cool, good use of metaphors, they were pretty good, made you think, and i agree lol, always needs to be a first, none the less, i enjoyed reading that, keep up the good work!
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hmmm,lots of thoughts now.i like your use of metaphors.i'm a HUGE fan/user of them myself.and i really like the lines,"there needs(has)to be a first"and"I need(have)to be a first"those lines really play with my miond quite a bit.and it's very cool actually.
and for the hell of comic relief....my friends do tell me"it's better in the back!"
i take their word for it because personally,i wouldn't know.
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